Showing posts with label Jemi Fraser. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Jemi Fraser. Show all posts

Monday, August 20, 2012

When To Stop Fine Tuning

Jemi Fraser asked when to stop fine tuning and send the manuscript out! What a great question. If it's too soon you risk looking unprofessional and putting off the agent or editor before they realize what a wonderful book they're holding. If you're like most of us and you're paralyzed by the fear that's exactly what will happen... Well, that can be bad too! How about a checklist to make you feel more comfortable? Because the truth is, no book is ever perfect. Most authors will tell you they can re-read their own work on the shelf a year later and cringe wanting to change something. So if you're waiting for perfection, you better get comfy!

Now for that checklist:

  • Have you thoroughly revised? Meaning not just read it over again, but gone through your own revision checklist and done passes for character, plot, pacing, extraneous scenes, adverbs and other extra words, sentence structure, etc.? Sound like a lot? Yep it is. That's what makes the difference though.
  • Have you had other eyes than yours on it? And not just the opening pages. I mean the whole darned thing. Yes that opening is vital, but I've seen books that start off AMAZING only to fall flat. If you're too nervous to have a beta reader look at it, how do you expect an editor to want to sell it to the general public? Be open to criticism. Ask yourself what was catching the reader and revise.
  • Have you put it away for a while and re-read? The impatient person's nightmare, but guess what? It's soooooo important. Take it from someone who learned that the hard way! Work on something new while you wait.
  • Do you find yourself changing tiny words here and there? That's usually a sign to me that I've about had it. Especially if the tiny tweaks really convey nothing different. :D
  • Do you have a query letter ready? That can be tougher than writing the novel!
  • Are you terrified? 
If you answered YES to most of these questions (or all) you are probably ready to send out a first batch of queries. My advice is to thoroughly research agents/editors who represent your type of manuscript and target those. I would send between five and ten queries at once and wait for feedback. No bites? take another look at the letter and or sample pages and see if you've been lucky enough to get any feedback. Then tweak and try again. It's tough out there, even when you do it right. So hang in there and remember to commiserate with your fellow writers while you wait (only nice words please - no negative talk about particular people EVER). Perseverance is key. Don't give up if you truly love it! Keep trying. 

Monday, November 15, 2010

Monday Madness - Jemi Fraser!

Before we begin I have to thank all of you who helped in the fight against breast cancer! The winner of a book and critique is BEKAH! And the choice of book or critique goes to SLUSHPILE SLUT! God I love that name. Congrats to both of you.

Today's Monday Madness features the incomparable Jemi Fraser!! Jemi is one of those awesome bloggers that everyone should know. She's fun, kind, and never fails to be a friend. Here's what she said about herself:

I'm a mom of 2 young adults, wife, Canadian daughter of Scottish immigrants. I'm a teacher and overly obsessed with my job. I've taught all kinds of kids at all kinds of grade levels, including kids with extreme social and behavioural needs. I'm the only sci fi/fantasy lover in my family - always have been. I'm the only dreamer in a family of practical folks. I'm a total sap with movies and books - get way too emotionally involved with them and with my friends and kids at school. :) I'm an animal lover and tree hugger and an eternal optimist. I'm calm unless my kids are threatened. I'm not a fan of conflict - I'm always the mediator and the peace maker. I've been writing for myself on and off for years, but only seriously for a couple. I love happy endings and have a hard time keeping my characters in trouble. Phew!

Well, this one's a given. Jemi is an ANGEL. What else could she be???

Thursday, May 27, 2010

HOLY COW SHE"S ACTUALLY DOING A CONTEST!!

So, here's the deal. There are a few things I want to get caught up on here at Paranormal Point of View. First I want to pass along the wonderful awards I was handed several weeks ago now.



Now, I have been doing some voracious reading and normally, would have reviewed the books with supernatural creatures as I've done in the past. In this case, however, I just plain wanted to tell you all to go buy and read the following two books as fast as your legs will carry you: Mistwood by Leah Cypess and White Cat by Holly Black. They are unbelievably well written and will keep you on the edge of your seat wanting more. Period.

Okay. Finally, I have one more announcement. I want to do another interview. You remember the ones I've done, right? Mermaid. Demon. Werewolf.

So, who is next? Give me a suggestion and tell me why in the comments. And then, since I am going to actually give a real prize this time, become a follower (if you aren't already) and tweet/blog/yell out your front door about the contest. Those be the rules. If you tell me in the comments you've met the criteria, I will trust you. The winner (the one I pick and yes it is totally subjective since I am conducting the interview) will receive your very own copy of either of the aforementioned White Cat by Holly Black or Mistwood by Leah Cypess - your choice. Um, I guess you need to leave me a way to contact you too, email would be good.

Ah yes! And the deadline... Hmm. Lets make it Next week Weds. for comments. I'll announce the winner one week from today on my Thursday post. GOOD LUCK!!