For a limited time the first five page critique will be offered at the introductory price of $35.
I will look for the following:
- Is she/he someone we connect with right away?
- Is his/her problem clear?
- Is his/her goal clear?
- PLOT (note: I may need to see a short synopsis to be thorough)
- Do you introduce the question soon enough?
- Do you plant breadcrumbs appropriately?
- Do you start at the right place?
- Are we appropriately grounded in the world?
- Do you have the adequate amount of description?
- Do you give us enough information?
- Do you give us too much information?
- Do you use the appropriate tone?
- What do I expect from this book?
- Do you vary your sentence/paragraph structure enough?
- Is it appropriate to your genre?
- Adverb/adjective/passive verb usage, etc.
*My critiques do not include grammar and line edits.
If you are interested please email me at LisaGailGreen at Gmail dot com.