I'm so happy to have the amazing Sarah Skilton on my blog today answering Julie Musil's question:
Who is
the narrator of your story, and how did you decide?
Thanks for having me at your blog, Lisa! This was a
terrific question for me to get, and I’m grateful for the opportunity to answer
it.
In BRUISED, my contemporary Young Adult novel, the
narrator is 16-year-Imogen, a black belt in Tae Kwon Do who freezes up at an
armed robbery and is left to wonder if martial arts failed her or she failed
it.
To tell this particular story, my narrator couldn't
be anyone else. Imogen is defined -- and more importantly, defines herself --
by her all-encompassing love of martial arts. When I'm writing, I ask myself,
"What's the worst thing that could happen to this particular person?"
If you don't write about the worst thing that could happen, you may lose the chance
to push your characters to their limits in terms of drama and storytelling. Who
wants to read about an event that doesn't affect the narrator very much, or
change him or her in some way? If it doesn't affect the lead character – really
affect them – it won't affect the reader, either.
Because Imogen's identity is so wrapped up in her
martial arts abilities, her failure to use those abilities when it really
matters destroys her in a way it wouldn't destroy someone else, someone who
hasn't spent the last six years training four times a week and dreaming of
opening her own martial arts school one day.
I also chose a 16-year-old girl for my narrator
because at that age the question of identity is especially important. The
teenage years are the ones in which we try to figure out what kind of person we
want to be. Coming-of-age / Young Adult novels tend to focus on defining
moments, first moments, in a way that
"adult" novels can't always do.
It was important to me to write the story from the
point of view of a young person who still has an idealized view of the world,
of herself, and of her place in that world. How will she react when that
idealized view is fundamentally challenged? I wanted to pose the question,
"If you're not who you thought you were, then who are you?"
Imogen as a narrator gave me the chance to do just
that.
Sarah Skilton
lives in Southern California with her husband and son. She has studied Tae Kwon
Do and Hap Ki Do, both of which came in handy while writing her martial
arts-themed debut YA novel, BRUISED, due out March 2013 from Amulet Books.
Bruised is now available for pre-order from B&N or Amazon,
You can also add it to your IndieBound Wish List, or GoodReads.
Bruised is now available for pre-order from B&N or Amazon,
You can also add it to your IndieBound Wish List, or GoodReads.
Such a great question to ask. What is the worst thing that could happen! And making this list before we start writing! Bruised sounds intense with a great character arc.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Laura! There's definitely some angst in the book, and hopefully readers will enjoy the character arc. I really appreciate your comment.
DeleteGreat question Lisa. And I love Sarah's answer. I can totally see why she chose Imogen as the POV character.
ReplyDeleteHi Natalie, and thanks! I tried to apply the theory that "plot is character, character is plot" for this book.
DeleteI love Sarah's answer. And I love kick ass characters. Literally, a kick ass character (marital arts results in kicking some asses, right?) :D
ReplyDeleteStina, I'm happy to report that there is much kicking in BRUISED. I'd love to know what you think if you decide to give it a read! :)
DeleteThanks for sharing your insights and experience with us, Sarah! It's wonderful to meet you.
ReplyDeleteNice to meet you, too! I hope my thoughts were helpful.
DeleteI like how you thought about your narrator--and knew it couldn't be anyone else. My most recent MS is just like that. Some of my earlier MS's I pushed the narrator to who I thought it should be instead of letting the story dictate it.
ReplyDeleteThe same thing happens to me when I'm trying to figure out the beginning. Sometimes I have to start writing first, and then figure out which scene best sets up the characters and story. Kudos on figuring out your narrator in your most recent MS!
DeleteGreat post! I think the wrong character as MC can ruin a book, or make it.
ReplyDeleteI'd love to see a post about unreliable narrators one day, because I'm currently planning a dual-unreliable-narrator book, and it's scaring the heck out of me!
Thanks, Amy! Glad you liked it.
DeleteA dual-unreliable-narrator book sounds amazing. Have you read "Inexcusable" by Chris Lynch?
I love the premise of this book. So crucial and compelling--so many young people (and my-age people :)) confuse who we are with what we do. I'm going to add this to my TBR pile right now! It sounds great.
ReplyDeleteMartina
Thanks so much, Martina! I'm thrilled you're adding it to your TBR pile, and I hope you enjoy the book. Really appreciate your comment.
DeleteLove - first moments as defining moment - life is so big and endless at that age. You put it beautifully. I am DYING to read Bruised. Both my kids were in Martial Arts and it did consume our lives.
ReplyDeleteYou are unbelievably sweet, Leslie. Thank you! :D
DeleteSarah, what a great answer to my question! Thanks. And I also can't wait to read BRUISED. Great premise, great title, and I'm sure it'll be a great story :)
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad I got to answer it! You're the best :)
DeleteThanks, Sarah. This is just what I needed today. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Linda. What a nice thing to say. Glad I could help.
ReplyDeleteI like this story line. It's different and interesting. Glad I stopped in.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! I'm grateful Lisa invited me to answer the question.
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