tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post7132177838999972227..comments2023-09-05T08:36:25.033-07:00Comments on Author Lisa Gail Green: Filtering Through CharacterLisa Gail Greenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-58389240452986283152011-04-26T22:54:17.289-07:002011-04-26T22:54:17.289-07:00Melissa - Welcome! I'm so glad you found me. T...Melissa - Welcome! I'm so glad you found me. Thanks for the compliment.Lisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-13229254077307800802011-04-26T22:21:08.799-07:002011-04-26T22:21:08.799-07:00Excellent post. The second paragraph has punch and...Excellent post. The second paragraph has punch and the feel of a mad ghost. Great blog, I'm definitely following. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04443736284850057306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-81265971409089828672011-04-26T13:17:36.944-07:002011-04-26T13:17:36.944-07:00Madeleine - thank you! :DMadeleine - thank you! :DLisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-1224293925196692032011-04-26T09:33:52.407-07:002011-04-26T09:33:52.407-07:00I like the edited passage. It really shows how voi...I like the edited passage. It really shows how voice can mature with editing. :O)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-78525124703370762712011-04-21T11:50:05.626-07:002011-04-21T11:50:05.626-07:00Tina - I feel special. :D Thanks!Tina - I feel special. :D Thanks!Lisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-64224856464149745632011-04-21T11:19:34.740-07:002011-04-21T11:19:34.740-07:00Lisa, LOVE THIS POST! ADded to my "tips and t...Lisa, LOVE THIS POST! ADded to my "tips and techniques" folder. Thanks!Tina Mosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09892617933410379929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-72679601172495438912011-04-19T14:28:35.110-07:002011-04-19T14:28:35.110-07:00EyeamImran- LOL! I'm just glad you didn't ...EyeamImran- LOL! I'm just glad you didn't die at all. And not just cuz I wouldn't want to deal with a ghost. :D Glad you liked it.Lisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-31604764075880946142011-04-19T14:03:45.813-07:002011-04-19T14:03:45.813-07:00i could have died reading the first one and nothin...i could have died reading the first one and nothing would've happened but if i died reading the second one, i'd have had to come back as a ghost and ask you what happened next -<br /><br />#cool exampleAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11966758859828356194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-28226131805253075842011-04-15T10:23:21.522-07:002011-04-15T10:23:21.522-07:00Patti - glad the example was helpful!Patti - glad the example was helpful!Lisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-40805929233739001002011-04-15T09:38:53.551-07:002011-04-15T09:38:53.551-07:00Fantastic tip. You could totally see the differenc...Fantastic tip. You could totally see the difference in your paragraphs.Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00685341739870191402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-24049801642866061782011-04-14T07:45:44.895-07:002011-04-14T07:45:44.895-07:00Lynda - Glad you see what I mean!
Sara - It makes...Lynda - Glad you see what I mean!<br /><br />Sara - It makes me want to keep writing to find out!Lisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-74649506541440524912011-04-13T21:50:04.494-07:002011-04-13T21:50:04.494-07:00What a great post, and a fabulous example. I agree...What a great post, and a fabulous example. I agree with Amie, I want to know what happens next! ;)Sara B. Larsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14213313028658810705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-46229095064874540722011-04-13T21:10:22.077-07:002011-04-13T21:10:22.077-07:00lol love the 2nd paragraph. Great example of voice...lol love the 2nd paragraph. Great example of voice and how great it is to filter through the character's POVLynda R Young as Elle Cardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09975442291393246148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-51351307347071494742011-04-13T07:46:01.927-07:002011-04-13T07:46:01.927-07:00Amie - me too! I kind of liked that ghost...Amie - me too! I kind of liked that ghost...Lisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-79009237800139840442011-04-13T04:58:58.761-07:002011-04-13T04:58:58.761-07:00Wow, what a fantastic post--the example's so s...Wow, what a fantastic post--the example's so strong, it really punches home the point. The second version has so much more personality and such a strong voice. I want to know what happens next!Amie Kaufmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15116472165351759477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-35255400131328320762011-04-12T20:28:13.878-07:002011-04-12T20:28:13.878-07:00Lydia - Why thank you. :DLydia - Why thank you. :DLisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-43647893506308626022011-04-12T19:36:10.857-07:002011-04-12T19:36:10.857-07:00Well filtered. Thoroughly so. #2 was so much bette...Well filtered. Thoroughly so. #2 was so much better!Lydia Kanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00484415427764822386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-50560245849922794812011-04-12T14:53:53.997-07:002011-04-12T14:53:53.997-07:00Girl - So glad I could make you laugh! And that th...Girl - So glad I could make you laugh! And that the examples helped.Lisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-38359475139137779892011-04-12T14:44:34.157-07:002011-04-12T14:44:34.157-07:00Brilliant post! Examples always make something so ...Brilliant post! Examples always make something so much easier to learn. Love the second paragraph, great voice, made me laugh.Tatum Flynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00074228011847976820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-32256172737076097872011-04-12T14:06:51.998-07:002011-04-12T14:06:51.998-07:00Karen - sorry about your lemonade! But I'm gla...Karen - sorry about your lemonade! But I'm glad to have an effect. ;D<br /><br />Leslie - Awww *slips money through cyberspace* Wink wink.Lisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-16190422413705894242011-04-12T13:18:34.858-07:002011-04-12T13:18:34.858-07:00I laughed my fool head off at the second paragraph...I laughed my fool head off at the second paragraph. Way to make a point, Lisa. You rock.Leslie S. Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17122865337924270039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-10645630250844640932011-04-12T10:36:11.160-07:002011-04-12T10:36:11.160-07:00LOL...great example of filtering/non-filtering.
...LOL...great example of filtering/non-filtering. <br /><br />Choked on my lemonade on the filtering paragraph, but the character's voice really came through and made it a much stronger paragraph.Karen Stronghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08697785820907711723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-5226125918288952872011-04-12T07:45:55.504-07:002011-04-12T07:45:55.504-07:00Corinne - <333 :DCorinne - <333 :DLisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-60766042949013403112011-04-11T22:29:25.157-07:002011-04-11T22:29:25.157-07:00omg that was great! what fabulous advice. I am goi...omg that was great! what fabulous advice. I am going to borrow that photo you've used and tape it to my monitor as a reminder. That skank!!!Corinne Ohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02808893058098769844noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6734108232999147338.post-81389957569743955152011-04-11T22:01:38.764-07:002011-04-11T22:01:38.764-07:00Margo - I'm touched.
Ghenet - Glad that came...Margo - I'm touched. <br /><br />Ghenet - Glad that came through for you.<br /><br />Julie - Any resemblance to persons either living or dead are purely coincidental. He he he.<br /><br />Ebony - And that's why I love that guy/ferret so MUCH!!<br /><br />Jemi - I LOVE YOU in a totally non-creepy-stalker kind of way.Lisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.com